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Open Poetry #42

Endless

kanashe
Member

since 2008-05-21

Posts 59
america

0 posted 2008-05-23 10:49 AM

An endless space
A weightless grace
Step forward
Step back
Movements like lace

Twisting and turning
A new kind of yearning
Up
Down
All around me floating

No sun
No rain
No sound
Silence loud
All I hear is nothing

Walking slowly
Breathing heavy
I see another world
Small
Alive
I reach for it and sigh

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

1 posted 2008-05-23 12:31 PM

I liked this and its form, good work.

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

2 posted 2008-05-23 12:49 PM

A wonderful adventure of the mind; it reads like the savoring of a fine wine!

Art

kanashe
Member

since 2008-05-21

Posts 59
america

3 posted 2008-10-09 03:42 PM

thanks for the comments

-ashe

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