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Open Poetry #42
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Yoinn
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0 posted 2008-05-21 07:50 PM


Dying Poets

Falling leaves...
dying poets floating,
writing their last words
on the mid day air.

Yoin
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1 posted 2008-05-21 11:34 PM

lovely piece

very tender
Sunshine
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2 posted 2008-05-22 10:20 AM

Oh, this likes me!
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3 posted 2008-05-22 11:51 AM

enjoyed very much

   yann
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4 posted 2008-05-22 05:47 PM

Surreal ~ and very poetic.


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Yoinn
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5 posted 2008-05-23 05:01 AM

Thanks everyone for your kind words.

Yoin
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6 posted 2008-05-23 10:08 AM

A marvelous metaphor is at the heart of this excellent poem! Falling leaves always intrigue me . . .

Art
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