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Open Poetry #42

Love Is Precious

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-05-22 07:15 PM

Love Is Precious

Nourish love and
keep it within
your care.

Value love
as if its
beyond compare.

Believe in love
and allow love to
believe in you.

Within this bonding
may all of your
dreams come true.

Love; within my heart
I warmly embrace it,
fully believing love
to be precious.

JamesLee
22May
2008

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PerfectlySweet

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-05-22 07:19 PM

Oh, James, it feels like you shower us with precious sparks of beauty.
This is very lovely and wise.
Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-05-22 09:48 PM

Yo James,

This works very well, and love is indeed precious.

In the line "as if its", I'd change that to "it's", the contraction for it is.

Bobby

K-K
Member

since 2008-03-13

Posts 153
Indiana

3 posted 2008-05-23 09:29 AM

AHHH, the sweetness. Precios is you work, thank you

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2008-05-23 10:13 AM

Hello James, there are truth that we will never be repeated enough, thank you for your wonderful poem...

Yann

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