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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Ah Jose You say it’s wrong Their tight pants That stop Below the waist Showing a little skin Know my friend It won’t last for long Being only A matter of time Winter comes To flowers And their dreams Let them Have their moment In the sun . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A philosophical approach to the extravagances of youth ... Very good, John. love Margherita ... who suddenly is aware of being among the fading flowers  ... no, I still love the sun ... on my face  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ah, then...but that which looks good in May, may not in September...the trick is to understand the calendar  |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
got that right...fashion...like the seasons...comes and goes though the cycles are not always as consistent as the seasons...yep, let them have their moment. |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
I say "Let them have their moment in the sun. Too soon winter comes". I love the way you express your thoughts so vividly with out direct inferences. Your meaning is keep clean without embellishments. sharyn "God made you as you are |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
This one hit straight home!!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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