Open Poetry #42 |
Memory |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Bright And dark Clouds Today The sky’s Changing moods— Seems familiar . |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo John, I got a kick out of this one. It's well done, and true. Bobby |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
KOOL! j. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thanks guys John . |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed The Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Isn't that just like memory...you have captured it well |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
So even clouds have mood swings. They are as mercurial as the rest of us. This was a lovely image. Thanks sharyn |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
"Seems familiar"--- understatement that drop like an anvil upon an anvil! Oh, how the clouds do change in the fading hum of passing moments . . . Loved it! Art |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Those darn clouds and their mood swings Anyway, I enjoyed your concise write up on the ever moody clouds. It made me think about them from a completely different perspective. ~Jill |
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jmjovies Junior Member
since 2008-05-03
Posts 32florida |
i like the idea of the sky changing moods. thanks |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
I enjoyed this...lots of message in few words! R |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I've had those oddly familiar moments myself...there is song by ALanis Morrsette called princes Familiar....beautiful song...ecspecially coming out of her normally sarcastic stuff. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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