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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Beneath A shard A fragment From some Long dead Civilization . . . A cricket chirps The only song It will ever know Under the shadows Of its summer moon . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a bit sad and I love that |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Ah Dixie, what a problem you are . . . John . |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
intrigued by the thought...enjoyed your poem. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine Zen minimalism! I am especially fond of the ending: "...A cricket chirps The only song It will ever know Under the shadows Of its summer moon" serious applause!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
But a song it is and you just surrounded it with unique beauty. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Stark brilliance. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enjoyed it yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh! I have been to Thera - I am passionate about the whole of Greece for every imaginable and unimaginable reason! Loved your poem. - Owl |
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