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Open Poetry #42

Haiku

Howie Gord
New Member

since 2008-03-18

Posts 1
Canada

0 posted 2008-04-15 03:07 PM

Lazy snowflakes fall
Slowly; it feels as though
The earth is rising.

I wake to swishing,
Curtains billow, then pull back,
The house is breathing!

You'll remember me,
When the west wind moves, among
The fields of barley.*

*found haiku from the song, "Fields of Gold"

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-15 03:50 PM

Absolutely beautiful. love the read.
And a very warm welcome tot his wonderful pip land.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-04-15 05:42 PM

hey, hey, beautiful post here and welcome to passions

JJ

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-04-15 05:48 PM

Enjoyed...James

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

4 posted 2008-04-16 11:37 AM

Nice work. Thanks for the pleasure of reading your verse.
sharyn

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

5 posted 2008-04-16 11:57 AM

interesting...your name caused my dyslexic mind to think of hockey...welcome to #42...enjoyed your poem.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

6 posted 2008-05-17 12:14 PM

now you must know who i am

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

7 posted 2008-05-18 06:00 PM

I enjoyed the first two haiku's, but absolutely loved the third.

- Owl

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