Open Poetry #42 |
four ford and fonda |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you said love was just another four letter word like ford or plow or play or other things people do to each other or by themselves but I read that story there in the sad song music of your eyes not out loud obvious but quiet just in case you saw my mouth moving around your name and you did too suddenly like a smile that sneaks up and just goes nude boldly but you looked away then nervous that you were blushing we danced that afternoon with other words that were easy and I was too almost too much but you didn't seem to mind us sharing a glass of time and maybe the more word later ________ Daark |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
quote: These are the outstanding lines but it only helped to make the whole of the poem quite memorable. Thank you, Sir. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms white...my pleasure to smile you, thanks ms |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
One of your most lovely ever, D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thank you babe |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
i find the strangeness and uniqueness of your poem, powerfully, attracting...in the way i perceive light is to the moth! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks friend rv...much appreciated your read |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Daark... lovely Mr Daark... your words delight me and smile me... just beautifully. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thanks lady friend for the eyes |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You capture every emotion with amazing sharpness, dear D.! And always you succeed in conveying the feelings with extraordinary beauty. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you special lady friend |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Peeking in on your word play makes me smile and long for more. Always wonderful - this is beautiful. A |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Too too much, as always, 2 |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
I cannot read this without smiling. Everyone else already grabbed my fave lines, so I'll just say it was fantastic. ~H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks lady friend _______________ ms bluezy, thanks special lady...time for coffee yet? ___________________ unbound one..thanks so much and welcome to the pipzoo...hope you linger |
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