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hyding the storms
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hyding the storms |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were lovely in your costume dressed up like another storm all of a sudden arriving there at the window of my mind and the laughter too after bringing rain to the ocean when just wet just wasn't enough but you said my poems were you made them dirtier than me but they fit you that way like just the proper treatment for your mrs hyde conditions when your private doctor was away and you were the ghost of yourself needing something more for color and to keep your fingers away from taking pictures of the flowers ________________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Daark.. you write lovely in its purest form... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*goodness* I really like this one D  But I can say that about pretty much everything you write |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
daark, another round of applause...i enjoy your poetry...i find it intriguingly stimulating. thanks for sharing. encore! encore! |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
The tales you tell of our inner most passions make you seem slightly psychic. Let us hope the lady finds what she seeks in her alternative persona. Very sensual and provocative. Quality as always sharyn "God made you as you are |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thanks lady friend ________________ ms suesea, you bless me babe, thank you _________________ friend rv, thank you for the reads and comments __________________ ms shyvl, humble thanks lady friend for the touch |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Another "Volltreffer" /the dictionary says that in English it's "slam-dunk", but it sounds funny to my ears! Oh, with your ending lines you just reminded me of my intention to take pictures of my blooming cactus-flowers ... they are gorgeous !Love, Margherita |
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jmjovies Junior Member
since 2008-05-03
Posts 32florida |
something about the way you write makes me think of the sound of paper being sliced. love this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you special lady __________ jm friend, thank you so much...I do appreciate that image.. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D ... and I smiled. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...grins |
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