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Open Poetry #42
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D.Lester Young
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0 posted 2008-05-23 12:36 PM

Uni-Verse

Sandstone weathered sandpaper spaces
Polished grit hourglass bi-focal faces
Telescoping time upon microscopic light paces
Straight taunt line among universal light chases
Of flight spectrum dynamic color tracing
Black ‘n white uni-verse canvas sketched places.

David L. Young05/22/08©
De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time

© Copyright 2008 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2008-05-24 02:14 AM

This stretches the imagination, good and tight~

Nice write, D. Lester~
D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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2 posted 2008-05-24 08:03 AM

Thank you Blue Serenade your comments are appreciated.
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