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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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* in time's waiting rooms air thick with recollection life empties slowly * |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
neat write...nice line: "air thick with recollection" |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I feel eternity unfolding in the waiting room of my mind, and were it not for recollections, I think eternity, itself, would end too soon! A superb write! Art |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Always enjoy your profound thoughts. Ice Box. Never miss a single one of your poems. Ida |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
icebox - you've been missing too long from these blue pages! I guess we need to breathe that air you speak of and then let it go. Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I value your philosophical thoughts very much, dear Charlie. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*feeling this* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Charly...So well written....with that ah hah feel about it. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What I don't understand is the mad rush of line waiting to get in...   |
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