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Internal Rhyme |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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As each tear fell down in silence there was no one to hear the swell. Only the earth could feel the sting of salt when catching each one as it fell. The wind heard the cries when no one else could hear and Mother Earth felt the sorrow that was blended with the fear. The trees danced around me as they tried to make me grin but a heart knows no laughter when things become so dim. The wind whispered softly trying to soothe a weary mind and it tried to ease the pain held within this heart of mine. The sun, it did embrace me as it tried to warm my heart but the chill lingers on when a hearts been torn apart. Mother Earth tried to speak to me as also did Father Time, to fill me with their peace and tranquil thoughts sublime. I feared I might no longer hear when the spirits spoke to me but still they didn't give up they held me close and tenderly. The Eagle soared above me in the distance and to him I turned my gaze while the clouds gave way to the brightness of haze. Then in unison they spoke they were calling me to hear. The message they were sending was making it so clear. Even through the darkest days there will always come the light and there will be a time to leave the darkness to the night. Believe in what your heart hears, listen to the internal rhyme~ all things shall pass and life heals........with time. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The sun, it did embrace me as it tried to warm my heart but the chill lingers on when a hearts been torn apart. Mother Earth tried to speak to me as also did Father Time, to fill me with their peace and tranquil thoughts sublime. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That is such a lovely verse Donna. I'm just sitting here breathing in the calm and serenity. The traquility is deeply soothing to me, and I thank you for that. Hug you, hon~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Darlin' Donna, I am saving this right NOW before I absent-mindedly forget!  There! Mission accomplished. Sweetie, this is one of my personal favourites of yours! ~ And believe me, that is saying a mouthful!!! In spite of the sad undertones, you wrote with incredible grace and ended on such a hopeful, inspiring note. Loving you! Linda  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Donna Dear, I, too, have this one saved. Your poetry is beauty in my life - but your inner rhyme is the real gem of your wriring. You shine it to perfection, my friend. Love and hugs, A |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I wish someone could figure out how to squeeze time into a squeeze tube, It's the only thing that ever really heals the deepest, invisable, scars. Loved this Gentle Spirit. Rich |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are indeed always held close and tenderly, dear Donna! A very beautiful, wise and touching write! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you each for stopping by and leaving your kind thoguhts, you are each appreciated. Hugs and peace ~D |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"and there will be a time to leave the darkness to the night. Believe in what your heart hears, listen to the internal rhyme~ all things shall pass and life heals........with time." Donna definite words I need to try and live by. Hope all is well with you and April. Soon school will be out and I will make a promise to you that we shall get together.  M |
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