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rad802
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since 2008-04-19
Posts 279
KY U.S.A.

0 posted 2008-05-09 06:27 AM


It's an interesting attitude overdosed on gratitude
Stagnated and unmotivated
Sedimentarilly constipated
They're big game with a pet name
Docile, domestically too tame

All we like sheep require leaders
A humbling thought sheep are quite dumb
So quick to stray these heavy bleeders
get targeted by everyone

So plump a morsel's rarely seen
upon a couch so vast and green
As heavy grazers go they'd be
most ravenous and slow to flee

Debtors to predators dust to dust
Upon the barbecue with trust
They oversleep they burp they bleep
and others reap as they combust


Rick Delmonico

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-09 11:06 AM


Not only do you possess a very captivating style, but you also transmit true depth of thought.

Great write.

Love,
Margherita

gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
2 posted 2008-05-09 02:20 PM


You have conveyed a lot of meaning through a well crafted and very readable poem.

Enjoyed,

Art

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