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Open Poetry #42
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SkaaDee
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since 2008-04-07
Posts 116
Canada
0 posted 2008-05-09 12:18 PM

mist invades every private inch,
enough so as to convince garment
to revoke its desire to cling
and part - as memory does of
long ago.
slowly - tenderly.
in this way, the artist inhabits cloud,
using sparks of brilliance to startle those below -
jarring memories of greatness.
Earth needs its lovers,
its poets,
needs the rain.
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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-09 10:30 AM

Absolutely delightful!!

Love,
Margherita
gilead
Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
2 posted 2008-05-09 12:44 PM

Ah, yes, the rain that waters the mind of the imagination---without it the poet cannot sing!

This is wonderful!

Art
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-05-09 02:02 PM

Lovely.
    Ida
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