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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. 
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Razormouth you cut me. Lashing-out you touch me. Thrash about in a wondrous sphere of impersonal friends. Aren't you a godsend, the living end, so full of direction you can't unbend. Primal etchings engraved upon your heart, speak of seductive scenery severed and apart. Our worlds collide, the friction draws a spark. You ride it high, then tumble in its ark. Panic knob I've pressed you, emotionally undressed you, and for a moment watched you glowing full with pride. Yet now you hide, your hope denied, so full of conclusions you can't decide. Primal etchings engraved upon your heart, reflect the distance sought as you embark. Our worlds collide, the friction draws a spark. You ride it high, then tumble in its ark. Rick Delmonico |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Sparkling poetry! Enjoyed this write. Love, Margherita  |
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kanashe Member
since 2008-05-21
Posts 59america |
this delightful poem was excellent i love it -ASHE- |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
quote: I like this poem but loved the lines quoted above. A |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Words can lift up or cut down, the little saying is not true...sticks ands stones may break my bones, but words will never harm me... verbal abuse is worse than physical, at least the physical bruises disappear! a great thought provoking poem! ARH~ You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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