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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

0 posted 2008-05-12 08:09 PM

Sola ga kurai

Kumo ga kurushii

Oame gou
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Darkened skies

Threatening clouds

Heavy rains
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Copyright © 2008 Victor Duna. All rights reserved.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-05-12 08:48 PM

Yo Victor,

Very nice. I can hear it.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-05-13 04:16 AM

Nice...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2008-05-13 10:02 AM

"Darkened skies

Threatening clouds

Heavy rains "

You certainly did a fine job
of creating an 'atmosphere'
with an economy of words!

I do so love rain storms!

EA

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2008-05-13 02:43 PM

I like Haikus

this one is luminous and brief as a lightning

yann

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-05-13 05:36 PM

nice write

JJ

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2008-05-14 07:34 AM

hi victor,

you composed the japanese version? i am impressed

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

7 posted 2008-05-14 08:41 AM

this was so vivid and intense.
sharyn

"God made you as you are
in order to use you
as He planned" J.C. Macauley

Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

8 posted 2008-05-14 09:05 AM

Thank you all for reading I am not fluent in Japanese but still trying : )

Virtual Abyss
Member

since 2008-04-09

Posts 52
East Coast - USA

9 posted 2008-05-28 12:12 PM

Very interesting, strong, and inspiring.

Thank you!

V/r,

Virtual Abyss

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2008-05-30 03:05 AM

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. Did I mention that this is beautiful?

Alison

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