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Open Poetry #42

My Secret.

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

0 posted 2008-05-07 04:18 PM

Prestigious words form abstractly
from the golden tip of my pen
while the text glows raidently
showing golden meaning again.

Florescent ability is nothing new
to the eyes of all who conceive me
they say it's the only thing I hold true
but it is something I fail to see.

My soul is affected by alienated affairs
that are outside of my control
my being is affect by those who don't care
and my mind is on constant patrol.

Looking for the bad things to happen
rather then the things that are good
these thoughts steer me to this depression
and my mind has never understood.

Why I ended up the way I am
and who I will end up being
am I just a pawn, am I just a lamb?
does my life have any meaning?

So with these thoughts, I say this with promise
This eternal battle I fought, has left me being dishonest.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-05-07 04:33 PM

Angel,

What “GASP”—dishonest?

Oh, I can’t believe that.  Give all that stuff back, and you’ll feel better.

I like the way you have written this.  It’s good work.

Bobby

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

2 posted 2008-05-07 04:35 PM

Thanks Bobby, :]

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-05-07 10:06 PM

Enjoyed!

ARCTIC WIND

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

4 posted 2008-05-08 12:41 PM

I don't think you can be dishonest when you write from the heart. Your poetry is work to be proud of.
sharyn

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