Open Poetry #42 |
alley behind hyde and soda |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I never was one for windows really but then you brought shadows and played mrs hyde and seek also and said shhh my husband is home but he don't mind my dancing if the windows are not soiled by a voyeurs eyes and the flowers too are not trampled down too often when a stranger climbs his wanting and leaves boot print worship outside like poems in someday maybe sand laced up to tight to be love but loose enough to just want to slip off wishing kind of comfortable that makes heavy the run away easy and you said a lady drew your smile when you were not looking and did I even notice your eyes how sad they were sometimes when the sun turned the lights on and I found you just in my mind ___________________ daark |
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jmjovies Junior Member
since 2008-05-03
Posts 32florida |
what a way with words i like it |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: It's good to notice certain things, men seem quite distracted too often! Thank you for the smiles you brought with this intriguing write. You are one of a kind ... poetically speaking Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
like poems in someday maybe sand laced up to tight to be love but loose enough to just want to slip off wishing kind of comfortable that makes heavy the run away easy ~*~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and I found you just in my mind *sigh* ... you often fill my mind Mr Daark... Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Me, I always look forward to your words, my friend...this'un's no different...great write. j. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much Enjoyed Dark! ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pipcrew, thanks to you all for the touch...so very much appreciated. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Sometimes, to speak breaks the spell so I shall remain quiet. A |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
the title alone is enough to draw you in, but this phrase is just too cool: "boot print worship" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe ____________ steavenr, thank you much my friend |
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