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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14
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Pluto

0 posted 2008-05-08 11:51 AM


After the smoke subsides
Struggle to my feet
Gone all the cries
Find my dark corner of retreat
Senseless it all seems to be
Confusion clouding the air
Battle wages on internally
Solace in my corner of tears
Alone to die another day
To see all the faces so clear
Time reflecting the way
Once when you were right here.....


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-08 12:45 PM


Victor, this is sad, those corners beckon when our hearts are heavy, but hopefully you will be able to LIVE again.

Very well written.

Love,
Margherita

Clang
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since 2005-12-15
Posts 222

2 posted 2008-05-08 04:17 PM


Pretty cool write....k
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