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steavenr
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0 posted 2008-05-05 08:59 PM


spinning sphere upon its axis
each mass equidistant
from its turn



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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-05-06 09:22 AM


Yes, it's fantastic, isn't it?

Enjoyed this much!

Love,
Margherita

gilead
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2 posted 2008-05-06 11:02 AM


Very interesting, steaven. Is this a property of a spinning spherical mass? Or has my early morning mind missed it altogether!

Art


r v wooo
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3 posted 2008-05-06 11:06 AM


steavenr, all that is
moves within its individual idioverse
and each, of all, has a unique center.

sometimes the system becomes unbalanced with every mind maintaining its unique focal point.

yet, out of the chaos...order comes! in an effort to reach universal harmony.

thus, out of the new order there is a new harmony...a solitude...a universal globe!

my childhood was spent outside a world of the past...the world of robert owen, new harmony, solitude, smith, mt. vernon and posey county.

enjoyed the poem and the carpet ride into a memory.

steavenr
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4 posted 2008-05-06 11:33 AM


Margherita, so glad you enjoyed -- thanks for reading

Art, this is one of my few poems that was written for meaning -- it is a statement against class descrimination...as we all (regardless of all the components that bring us to class distinction) in the larger picture of the order of things, live at equal distances from the axis of the spinning globe upon which we live...see why I chose this short format?

r v woo, thank you for your enlightening comments -- feel like I should be sitting with my legs crossed looking up at the wise countenance of my guru

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2008-05-08 02:50 PM


I like the spin!
gilead
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6 posted 2008-05-08 06:01 PM


Hi, steaven. My interest in physics made me think inside the box on this one! Thanks for the explication.

Art

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