Open Poetry #42 |
universal globe |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
spinning sphere upon its axis each mass equidistant from its turn |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, it's fantastic, isn't it? Enjoyed this much! Love, Margherita |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Very interesting, steaven. Is this a property of a spinning spherical mass? Or has my early morning mind missed it altogether! Art |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
steavenr, all that is moves within its individual idioverse and each, of all, has a unique center. sometimes the system becomes unbalanced with every mind maintaining its unique focal point. yet, out of the chaos...order comes! in an effort to reach universal harmony. thus, out of the new order there is a new harmony...a solitude...a universal globe! my childhood was spent outside a world of the past...the world of robert owen, new harmony, solitude, smith, mt. vernon and posey county. enjoyed the poem and the carpet ride into a memory. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Margherita, so glad you enjoyed -- thanks for reading Art, this is one of my few poems that was written for meaning -- it is a statement against class descrimination...as we all (regardless of all the components that bring us to class distinction) in the larger picture of the order of things, live at equal distances from the axis of the spinning globe upon which we live...see why I chose this short format? r v woo, thank you for your enlightening comments -- feel like I should be sitting with my legs crossed looking up at the wise countenance of my guru |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I like the spin! |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Hi, steaven. My interest in physics made me think inside the box on this one! Thanks for the explication. Art |
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