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Of Eventide... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I gaze through an open door upon a distant past, and see you there, alone, ensconced in shadows cast, by depths and breadths of what once was, of memories forgotten, yet through time's haze, shines clarity of grace by love begotten. In the dim of vespertine lays down a dying day I stand alone mid multitudes of stars in heaven's sway welkin mysteries now espied as to the night I glide, entering through opened door, I touch on eventide. [This message has been edited by Tim (05-06-2008 03:36 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tim~ You totally drench me in your ink~ 'In the dim of vespertine lays down a dying day' God ... sooooooooooooo gorgeous~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You created a magical atmosphere. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at this lovely, Sir. I had to peer through raindrops just to find the dusk. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
OH I want to go there!!! Excellent poem, Tim~ Absolutely heavenly!!! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Nice work. I always know I am in for a treat when I stop by and read your work. Marilyn |
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