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jmjovies
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0 posted 2008-05-06 12:13 PM



if you were a letter
i'd slice you open
with the sharp end of my pen,
glance at the greeting
and slide down to the end

© Copyright 2008 Jillian - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2008-05-06 12:44 PM


Jillian~
WELCOME to our friendly circle of poets~

That is an interesting take on a greeting letter~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Artic Wind
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2 posted 2008-05-06 09:57 PM


WELCOME TO PIP!



ARCTIC WIND

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displaced
3 posted 2008-05-07 12:03 PM


welcome to Passions!

I love this poem!

steavenr
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4 posted 2008-05-07 11:43 AM


welcome to PIP

interesting write

Honeybunch
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5 posted 2008-05-07 11:59 AM


Maybe you should think of a book instead of a letter - sometimes what takes longer is more enjoyable.  

Enjoyed your words.  

Helen

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