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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2008-05-05 02:34 AM

She awoke to think that maybe
she’d love you with her thoughts
instead the tears of soul distress
flowed freely down her cheeks.

This happens when intention
goes awry within the mind
and truth breaks from denial
like clouds burst in the sky.

And there for her to see
the restlessness of sleep
and how the bedclothes lay
as a symbol of dismay.

This happens when control
is left up to the soul
for in the dead of night
she lives the plight of love.

But time so kindly brought again
the sweetest of all smiles
and the bed now neat and tidy
where once she knew of agony!

Helen / 5 May 2008

[This message has been edited by Honeybunch (05-05-2008 08:28 AM).]

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-05-05 02:45 AM

quote:
This happens when control
is left up to the soul
for in the dead of night
she lives the plight of love.

Dear Helen, your beautiful words linger as your nightly perceptions do when you awake at dawn ...

Soulful write!

Love,
Margherita

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2008-05-05 03:07 AM

Dear Margherita - yes, and as the soulful feel lingers behind a smile so life moves us all in whichever way it so chooses to do!

But maybe we move ourselves.

Love
Helen

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-05-05 07:09 AM

Helen... this was a wonderful read... thank you. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2008-05-05 08:27 AM

Thanks, Roniece! Just telling it like it was lest I forget.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2008-05-05 12:39 PM

Enjoyed your "telling it like it was" Helen.
good writing.
Ida

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2008-05-05 01:16 PM

Creatively told, my friend ... very much enjoyed the read...

jimmy

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2008-05-05 03:45 PM

Thanks Ida and Jimmy. Wouldn't it be great to really know what happens when we sleep?

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

8 posted 2008-05-05 04:08 PM

Honeybunch This was a treat to read. Thanks for sharing
sharyn

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

9 posted 2008-05-05 04:09 PM

Thanks, Sharyn. Glad you enjoyed.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2008-05-05 07:06 PM

"She awoke to think that maybe
she’d love you with her thoughts
instead the tears of soul distress
flowed freely down her cheeks.

This happens when intention
goes awry within the mind
and truth breaks from denial
like clouds burst in the sky."

love these above~~~

M

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

11 posted 2008-05-07 08:33 AM

Really love the way you look at life Helen.
So very inspiring. Loved this.

Rich

jmjovies
Junior Member

since 2008-05-03

Posts 32
florida

12 posted 2008-05-07 10:14 AM

the first two lines very nearly gave me whiplash... it's great

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

13 posted 2008-05-07 11:55 AM

Thank you, poet friends, for your kind comments. Very much appreciated.

Helen

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