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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-05-05 07:40 PM



I eat off, of these crumbs,
you have left behind,
still I hunger,

Pains stabbing,
it is not enough,
soon I will die.

From dehydration,
lonely, distraught,
missing you...


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2008-05-05 08:04 PM


ARH-

Sadness in these words of a broken heart I would think!  



ARCTIC WIND

[This message has been edited by Artic Wind (05-06-2008 09:56 PM).]

shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
2 posted 2008-05-05 08:53 PM


Romantic Heart-  The struggle to survive a broken heart is universal.  I particularly liked the way you expressed it here
"I eat off, of these crumbs,
you have left behind,
still I hunger,"
sharyn

rad802
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since 2008-04-19
Posts 279
KY U.S.A.
3 posted 2008-05-06 06:40 AM


I'm having the same problem.
Hope my efforts pay off.

Rick Delmonico

vandana
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4 posted 2008-05-06 11:32 AM


enjoyed
Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

5 posted 2008-05-07 08:51 AM



Oh the hunger pangs of lonliness, from a broken heart. A malady only a big serving of reunion, with a side of affection can stave off.

Hoping your heart is fed soon Romantic.

Rich

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2008-05-09 05:55 PM


Nice writing of the missing side of love...James
2islander2
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by the sea
7 posted 2008-05-09 06:17 PM


I hope you will get over it soon...

  have a nice day

     yann

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