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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
Posts 415


0 posted 2008-05-02 10:16 PM



Why am I the only one forsaken
for I am not thee only one
who walks around, teething
raping,
Why can't I be everyone!

Alone in the twilight
seen in the dark
in a alleyway feeding
why can't I be everyone!

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...
..
.

You see I can not be forsaken
because I'm not thee only one
we walk around you
teething
raping
I don't need to be like everyone!

Seen between dimensions
forshadowing my ultimate fate
forsaken with my body's cremation
help me before it's to late!!

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Larrysmom
Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
1 posted 2008-05-02 11:16 PM


Wow Angel... go check your email.

Tammy<333

shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
2 posted 2008-05-03 04:07 AM


There is so much pain and discovery in your work.  I enjoy reading it.  Thanks for sharing
sharyn

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