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Open Poetry #42

Just for today

rad802
Member

since 2008-04-19

Posts 279
KY U.S.A.

0 posted 2008-05-02 05:57 PM

I look ahead to better things and all the good the future brings must surely come to those who wait patiently
When I look back I can choose to see the good and bad selectively so I find comfort in my memories

But we can't buy tomorrow and we don't own yesterday but by grace we're freely givin today
No we can't touch tomorrow can't hold on to yesterday so it's better just to live for today

It's taken me a while to see some of what God's planned for me you know i still get anxious over what is yet to be
And when I look into the past at all the things that didn't last you know I still wonder why they go so fast

Cause we can't buy tomorrow and we don't own yesterday but by grace we're freely givin today
No we can't touch tomorrow can't hold on to yesterday so it's better just to live for today

Rick Delmonico

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-05-02 08:20 PM

rad802,

This is fairly good. Keep at it.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-05-03 03:43 AM

Enjoyed it and shared a lot.

Yann

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

3 posted 2008-05-03 03:50 AM

I think you have some really important ideas to convey and the poem does that fairly well. I think with a little more work it would really standout.
sharyn

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