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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. I refuse To forget you This I will not do Come Hell Set your fires Burn away All desire And see Who yet inspires . |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Powerful and eloquent, John. Love this one. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting 'write!' applause!! |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
unique! I refuse To forget you..I shall remember you. This I will not do which one? "refuse to forget". Come Hell Set your fires Hell already is a burning place. Will "your fires" make a significance? Burn away All desire death And see Who yet inspires The original fire. Dear John, if you want to say something about this poem. have a wonderful weekend!!!  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This makes perfect sense to me, John I read it just the way you wrote it and I like it just the way it is. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Interesting Write!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Joe Crow Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 66Indiana |
I woke up this morning and wrote this as I think it may be one you missed. Standing tall she entices him with her flower the mighty trunk trembles like a great golden shower, everything is covered. Tree sex Yeah, you probably already guessed it was pollen, it is that time of year, it was all over my truck... Joe |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Joe, I wish it was as easy as sex How happy I would be John . |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Huan Yi Yet another exquisitily writtten and structured piece of verse no elaboration needed. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. sharyn |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, This is very fine work. I like the way it sneaks up on the punch line. Bobby |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What a classy poem.....24 simple words, and you express such a subtle volume of meaning. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
strong write...powerful words and phrases...and who that has ever written cannot identify to some degree with this...thank you for putting in eloquent words what most of us have felt... |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Hats off to you, Sir! This is poetry at its finest---elegant, uncluttered, powerful! Art |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
I thought I was going to love this even before I opened it… I am not disappointed. Tammy<333 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
my muse seemed to disappear with my sadness |
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