Open Poetry #42 |
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Felix and Wawa Talk By The Delaware |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
It’s just past midnight. Twelve-year-olds Felix and Wawa are sitting on the bank of the Delaware off Fairmont Avenue. No one cares they’re out that late, so don’t even ask. They’re sitting beside the old wooden water pipes going into the Delaware. They’re watching big cargo ships bring stuff in from far away. Felix is telling Wawa how much he misses his dad. He's telling Wawa about the water wheel his dad made him, before his dad got taken away, and locked-up. Wawa tells Felix he’ll see his dad again. That won’t happen, and they both know it. It never did. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (05-01-2008 11:33 PM).] |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
He telling Wawa about the water wheel his dad made him, before his dad got taken away, and locked-up. "He's or He is" This one is sad Bobby... I'm sending Felix a hug. Tammy<333 |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Tammy, Thanks for spotting another mistake. Felix says thanks for the hug Hon. I don't know what Felix would do without you and Wawa. Love Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Emotion Filled Bobby! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bobby, it is sad...I particularly enjoyed the part when they were watching ships, I live in a port too...I visited Philadelphie in 1996, it is a beautiful city...I slept in the youth hostel and saw the harbour, the museum, the liberty bell and some nice ancient political buildings...It was summer and it's a great memory talking about it... Have a nice day yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Artic Wind, Yes, I suppose it is a little emotion filled. It was actually a comforting experience for both Felix and Wawa, as Wawa had dad problems of his own. BTW, I traveled through the mountains of Montana by train as a child. It's a lovely place. I used to ride free all over because my mother worked for the railroad. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, Do you mean to tell me you were in Philadelphia in 1996, and you didn't stop in to see me? That's very naughty. I'm glad you enjoyed your stay here. It is a beautiful and wonderful city. I still live only a few blocks from the river. The kids, the dog, and I still go there often. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
hugs for Felix, Bobby... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Glad to know Felix had WaWa to talk to. Felix experienced too much sadness in his life not to have a friend. sharyn |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear RDB, Felix hugs you right back. He's good with the hugs. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Sharyn, Yes, Wawa is a very good friend for Felix. Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A very close moment between caring friends that would never be forgotten. Simply stated poem ~ but deeply felt by this reader. I have had such memorable moments of sharing with friends ~ and I hold them dear to my heart. Sad scenario for Felix regarding his father ~ but Felix is strong. Life has made him that way. ![]() Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Watching ships moving in and out of the harbour is a scene that every boy would like to share with a father too, I understand the sadness of the moment, but it is alleviated by the presence of a true, caring friend. Love this one, dear Bobby. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
It's great to have a true friend to talk to, it can get you through a lot. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Linda, For the kind words on the poem. Yes, Felix is one tough cookie. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, Yes, Wawa, while being a tough guy, was always there for me. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Ida, What you say is very true. Love Bobby |
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