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Didymus
Junior Member

since 2008-05-01

Posts 33
USA

0 posted 2008-05-01 10:28 PM

My deck is brushed with a modest breeze
The air neither cool nor warm
My morning coffee is sweet and strong

Thunder reminds me why the deck is wet

The leaves and small branches of the black locust tree Rustle as a counter point to humming of the compressors of the IGA store down the block

Morning is good even as the sore stiffness of my body Ebbs away from the inactivity of night sleep

Good Friends and Loved ones head the
List of why that Life is very good

The sounds and sights of nature and civilization
Make up the other list in my mind's eye other reasons
Why

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2008-05-01 11:07 PM

In my mind, Didymus, the sound of your

Why

echoes deeply.

Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your email
for a very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

2 posted 2008-05-01 11:26 PM

Yes, loved ones and good friends do make life very good and very worth living… And nature is awesome. Beautiful write. Thanks for sharing it and welcome to PIP!

Tammy<333

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-05-03 03:17 PM

WELCOME TO PIP!

ARCTIC WIND

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2008-05-04 01:46 PM

Didymus~
WELCOME to the passionate halls of Passions In Poetry~

Your morning deck sounds like a nice place to be~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2008-05-04 01:47 PM

Welcome!

I love this! Share more!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2008-05-04 03:29 PM

Welcome, didymous! Your debuting poem has whetted my appetite for more! ~ More, please!

I was right there with you on the deck and savouring the flavour of your contemplative, appreciative thoughts.

I like the way you think, live, ~ and write!

Giving you a big, warm welcoming hug,
Earth Angel

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