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PrestonThePoet
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since 2007-11-07
Posts 87


0 posted 2008-05-01 10:13 PM


The world frozen in silence
A walk past a bumblebee,
Wings glued to air, motionless.
I extend a trembling finger
And gently touch its wing.
Like ice to fire
My friend has melted.


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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2008-05-01 10:58 PM


Preston ~ the Poet has returned to PiP!

This precious poem is sweetly tender ~ yet oh, so sad...

Well done!

Giving you a warm, welcome-back hug,
Linda

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-05-02 01:36 AM


Your poetry has a special touch that I especially enjoy. Preston.
I always watch for your posts.
                                Ida

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-05-03 03:23 PM


Very touching

ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2008-05-04 06:59 AM


oh it's lovely to see your work again Preston!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
5 posted 2008-05-04 08:18 AM


A truly hearwrenching image. Thank you for sharing
sharyn

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