Open Poetry #42 |
-April 27- |
MysteriousCellist New Member
since 2008-04-16
Posts 6Florida, USA |
-APRIL 27- I stand at the gate, to a graveyard. Here lie the souls, the ones lost and forgotten, but are they really fogotten? If they are, then why am I here? Here lie my best friend, here lie my girlfriend, here lie my girlfriends friend. They all died because of me. From a stupid mistake I made, and they are all gone. The ones closest to me. My brother and sister, my future wife, Gone. All three, I've never seen before or in a year. All three closer to me then any 'real' thing in the world. All three die in the same night. All three die for the same reason. Because I died... I lost them all in one night, and couldn't bare the loneliness. I slept and never woke. The last words of each to me, I Love You. Lo, How a Rose E'er Blooming, a beautiful song. It played at all of our funerals. Everyone cried at their funerals but for mine, nobody came. ~IAN BELL ~MysteriousCellist |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Such a powerful poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
How very sad, Ian. My heart goes out to you. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Writing out your emotions works wonders don't ya think! Nice emotion filled write Mysterious! ARCTIC WIND |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Brilliant Poetry...enjoyed! You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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