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Open Poetry #42

the bright sky

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-04-28 05:16 PM

i had a dream
of the sky
it was shining so bright
that i had
to close my eyes
but when i
opened them again
the sky that was
shinning so bright
was gone
leaving me all alone
in my dreams
thinking of what
that might have been
and why i had
that feeling that i knew
what it was

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2008-04-28 10:49 PM

Dreams can be hard to figure out sometimes. This one sounds pleasant though, I think! I stopped trying to figure mine out a long time ago! I'm just glad I still wake up in the morning!

AAB
Member

since 2008-04-10

Posts 99
Canada

2 posted 2008-04-28 10:53 PM

ah those dreams that leave you with no memory only a feeling. The harder you try to rember and hold on to it the faster it goes.

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

3 posted 2008-04-28 11:31 PM

This is awesome JJ… It reminds me of how I am avoiding some and longing deeply for others.

Tammy<333

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-05-10 12:25 PM

Makes me wonder, JJ, if dreams are our reminders to learn lessons from what we have done.

I like this one.

Alison

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