Open Poetry #42 |
words of parchment |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
words of parchment lay in rest on still-dressed lines of pardoned ink dreams in forms of laden thoughts do their feats of yore rethink and softness reigns in light let loose pallored cheeks drawn on billowed beams words of parchment stand the test of time-tiered silhouettes serene thoughts of wise and clever meet to call their power upon the scene and stillness gathers in knowledge’s lore radiating truth to all who reason and who read words of parchment, words of truth |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I do so enjoy a richly, bardic piece of writing! Your quill is finely honed! Another gem from your pen! ~ and a Love & Poet Light, Linda |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Thank you, Linda...I wrote this as I looked upon and admired one of my old, framed Bible pages (1612) |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
This was so well done--it left me speechless. Your craftmanship was superb Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Thank you, sharyn -- your comment leaves me speechless, thank you... |
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AAB Member
since 2008-04-10
Posts 99Canada |
Thats officaly one of my new favorite poems |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Wow! Absolutely WOW... Tammy<333 |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Being an old seminarian from the 1960s, I can really relate to this poem. I like its theme, and especially how it's so well crafted. Art |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Steaven~ I adored the all of this~ 'pardoned ink' ... a *sigh* waiting for a place to exhale~ Lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
AAB, thank you…I appreciate your taste Art, that’s what I like about poetry best…how it helps us relate to our lives…thanks Tammy, thank you deeply Marge, Thank you...love your sigh |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh, I really love your expression in this poem. Well done. Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed, Steaven. Ida |
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