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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
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 Mashing her thoughts together like last nights potatoes She stays too long in the past again Staring at nothing and seeing everything Analyzing her own weak condition Bottles whistle and shine on the tree Cobalt instruments of the wind Keeping away the troubled spirits |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
She stays too long in the past again Staring at nothing and seeing everything. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It's hard to pull ourself away some days. I really enjoy your short little poems, they are unique and inspiring. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Bottles whistle and shine on the tree Cobalt instruments of the wind Keeping away the troubled spirits" ~ Does that really work? Perhaps I best start collecting some to put on my spirit tree!  Very much enjoyed! Love to you, Tina!  Linda |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful, Tina. Once I saw a tree filled with chipped coffee cups. I loved it. A |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Clever idea and I always enjoy your poetry, Tina. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful and original...The photography is beautiful too. yann |
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