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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Misty blackbirds clouds of sparrows, fluttering rainbows and colored nightingales. They don't need cellos or black cheap pianos, they are the Music, Music of trees. [This message has been edited by 2islander2 (04-27-2008 09:58 AM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yann, What are blackpies? I don't think we have them here in Philly. Very nice poem. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Playing piano I tried modestly to make music as do birds... A french composer Olivier Maessian composed a piece called Oiseaux, it's seems like no music at all...birds are really gifted... yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Sorry Bobby I invented misfortunately the word blackpie, it could have been a bird... Thanks for commenting me yann |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
birds...as the 'music' of trees(!) well done!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Awww, birdsong is always music to my ears ~ and spirit!  Lovely little write that has me smiling!  EA |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You always view the world in such a beautiful way, yann. Ida |
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Caliban Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57 |
I'm not going to be able to go outside now without thinking of this. Great Write  [This message has been edited by Caliban (04-27-2008 08:27 PM).] |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Yann- Your words in their simplicity also provide a unique and refreshing interpretation of things we take for granted. for example birdsongs and music. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Yann~ What's not to love about this ? Nuttin' honey~  I love birds ... I love music I love rainbows ... I love trees I love the way you weave the thoughts together in lovely poetry~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very lovely descriptive picture you paint! ARCTIC WIND |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes Yann... you have described this very well... sweet music to the ears... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bruce, E A and Ida, it's great to be commented . yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Caliban, Sharyn, Marge, A W and Roniece for your kind comments, what would be a poem without them... yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Marge and Sharyn for your graceful comments... yann |
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