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2islander2
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0 posted 2008-04-27 07:34 AM


Misty blackbirds
clouds of sparrows,
fluttering rainbows
and colored nightingales.

They don't need cellos
or black cheap pianos,
they are the Music,
Music of trees.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (04-27-2008 09:58 AM).]

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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-04-27 07:38 AM


Yann,

What are blackpies?  I don't think we have them here in Philly.

Very nice poem.

Bobby

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2 posted 2008-04-27 07:39 AM


Playing piano I tried modestly to make music as do birds...
A french composer Olivier Maessian composed a piece called Oiseaux, it's seems like no music at all...birds are really gifted...

    yann

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3 posted 2008-04-27 07:41 AM


Sorry Bobby I invented misfortunately the word blackpie, it could have been a bird...

  Thanks for commenting me

   yann

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4 posted 2008-04-27 09:06 AM


birds...as the 'music' of trees(!)

well done!!

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5 posted 2008-04-27 09:14 AM


Awww, birdsong is always music to my ears ~ and spirit!

Lovely little write that has me smiling!


EA

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6 posted 2008-04-27 01:35 PM


You always view the world in such a beautiful way, yann.
                            Ida

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7 posted 2008-04-27 03:00 PM


I'm not going to be able to go outside now without thinking of this. Great Write  

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8 posted 2008-04-27 04:15 PM


Yann-  Your words in their simplicity also provide a unique and refreshing interpretation of things we take for granted. for example birdsongs and music. Thanks for sharing
sharyn

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9 posted 2008-04-27 04:24 PM


Yann~
What's not to love about this ?
Nuttin' honey~

I love birds ... I love music
I love rainbows ... I love trees
I love the way you weave the thoughts together
in lovely poetry~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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10 posted 2008-04-27 04:29 PM


very lovely descriptive picture you paint!



ARCTIC WIND

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11 posted 2008-04-27 07:01 PM


yes Yann... you have described this very well... sweet music to the ears... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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12 posted 2008-04-28 06:46 AM


Hi Bruce, E A and Ida, it's great to be commented .

  yann

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13 posted 2008-04-28 06:49 AM


Thank you Caliban, Sharyn, Marge, A W and Roniece for your kind comments, what would be a poem without them...

  yann

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14 posted 2008-04-28 06:59 AM


Thank you Marge and Sharyn for your graceful comments...

   yann

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