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in the shadow of giants [beautiful] (for your eyes and ears)
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in the shadow of giants [beautiful] (for your eyes and ears) |
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tnhness Junior Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 15 |
hi everybody, it's been a while...ahh finals here's one for two or more of your senses in the shadow of giants [beautiful] ----------------------------------- Turn the screw Feel the pinch He said to me as he sat on the street And his eyes they were bleeding Black in the center I could not remember The words that he uttered from down in the gutter Years they pass Somehow we last I find myself in the line just to see him These troubles I bring him To see his face It’s a race Here you can take my place Looks like you need it Well I’ll just concede it Look ahead Where I see He said to me as he sat on the street And his eyes they were bleeding Black in the center The light was escaping The words that he offered were mine for the taking It’s beautiful Plant a seed Next to me He said to me as he sat on the street And his eyes they were bleeding Watch as it tries to take Through the rock and the weight Stronger than we are Now make it your saving grace It’s beautiful if you care to experience the musical version of this, listen here December Rising hope some enjoyment ensues:-) |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful, I particularly liked the last stanza. yann |
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tnhness Junior Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 15 |
thanx. that's my favorite part too. |
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