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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2008-04-26 07:50 AM

In Leaning

In
leaning back
I watch the shadows
on the ceiling, as the fan
spins its cool below
to tame
thoughts

Shades
of white
sponged levels of clouds
hiding imperfections of old
producing calming
effects

Here,
where all
feels safe and secure
even if in dreams
closing eyes
remembering

When
yesterday was
the today of hope
with tomorrow a reach
in hands,
mine.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-26 12:41 PM

Beautiful
love
When
yesterday was
the today of hope
with tomorrow a reach
in hands,
mine.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2008-04-26 12:44 PM

Inspiring ceiling .......

always good to look you up

Ct

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2008-04-26 02:16 PM

"In
leaning back
I watch the shadows
on the ceiling, as the fan
spins its cool below
to tame
thoughts"

~ You put me there! ~ Once again!

Linda

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

4 posted 2008-04-26 02:26 PM

Excellent Poem, so relaxing to me for some reason ^.^

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2008-04-26 02:30 PM

When I finished renovating and decorating this particular room I sit in with my computer, I sponge painted the ceiling in shades of white layers...it's like looking at clouds when I lean back~~
thank you,
M

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-04-26 02:38 PM

Very descriptive write! Nakd

ARCTIC WIND

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2008-04-26 05:15 PM

M,

This is lovely and is a real keeper.

A

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2008-04-26 07:03 PM

nice, as always my favorite line was "sponged levels of clouds
hiding imperfections of old" great imagery

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

9 posted 2008-04-26 09:53 PM

You wrote it well Maureen

as you usually do.

Lindsay

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