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Hold Your Tongue
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Hold Your Tongue |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
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 Hold your tongue, my dearest Speaking will only ruin this moment Suns are exploding behind my eyelids Stars are miniscule inside my mind To let them go is a wonder, that only you can release To keep them stored, an abomination My dearest, hold your tongue Let your waves wash over my shores Soothing tides replenish my love The moon pulls you towards me Holding lunar thoughts of us entwined My darling, hold your tongue |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Beautiful.truly. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
unspeakingly stellar!! Ct |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Awww, communing in silence. As you say, there are those times when spoken words can spoil the moment. winky wink A sweetly romantic and coquetish write!   Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderfully Written! ARCTIC WIND  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
splendid. yann |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wonderful, Tina. I just came back from being at the ocean - and I so can relate to this. I love it and am saving it. Thank you, Alison |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Thanks all |
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