Open Poetry #42 |
The Sweeter Side |
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Cade, when I think of you I think of confident love. I think of laughter and sharing secrets. I think of the ocean. Blue is the color of the sky and the waves you rode. Blue water kissing clouds, laughter a song. The wind sings in lilting tones. When I think of you I think of stories shared at dusk. I think of whispers shared like delighted children. I pat my chair – sit by me. Sit by me, my friend; let’s talk of smiling into cotton candy. Drink this day with gusto, hold it close. Never will it be lost. When I think of you I think of forever in my heart. I think of memories, happy – so happy.. I think of you, Cade. ... Ali |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I do so like your Cade thoughts my love... hugs to you ... love RDB x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Me too, Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Alison, "Sit by me, my friend; let’s talk of smiling into cotton candy." That's a beautiful thought. Bobby |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Very touching. True feelings from a true friend. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have a wonderfully creative expression to your poems Ali. Enjoyed ;0 |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Wow Alison, this is gorgeous and very much worth Cade’s memory. Tammy<333 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
RDB, Thank you - today he told me to think of the good times. So, that's what I am doing. xoxoxo Ali ------ xoxoxo to you, Ida. A ------ Thank you, Bobby, my friend. Alison ------- Seoulair Yes, I love my friend very much. He is - amazing. Alison -------- TD, Thank you so much. I so much enjoy your writing too. I need to say that more when I read them, I think (smiles). Ali ------- Tammy<333, Thank you. There is so much about him to share. He's one of my favorite people in the world. Alison -------- Dixie xoxoxoxo A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...yep...!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...thanks for the sweeter side...James |
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Virtual Abyss Member
since 2008-04-09
Posts 52East Coast - USA |
Hello Ali, It's amazing the conglomerate of little things that make you smile about someone you care about. Thank you for sharing them. V/r, Virtual Abyss |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Yep. A |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
James You remind me how important the sweeter side is with every poem of yours that I read. Thank you. Ali ---- Virtual Abyss, Cool name. Thank you for the comment and for reading. Welcome to PiP too. Ali |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Sweet, you are....Yep that is for sure...and such a good, kind friend....I am proud to have you as my friend Mz A...thanks J xx |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
I love the softness, I feel as though you are the kindest person by reading your poems. Makes this place feel rather "Homey" |
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Virtual Abyss Member
since 2008-04-09
Posts 52East Coast - USA |
Thanks Ali, I'm enjoying it so far. Haven't had to many hits on my last two posts though. So I posted two edgier poems tonight and spent a lot more time out on the site. We'll see if it pays off. Have a good weekend! V/r, Virtual Abyss |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
John, You a very kind man and I really appreciate you. Thank you for checking in on me from time to time. Love, A _____________ K-K, You know your comment is one of the nicest things that anyone has ever said to me. I am not always nice - I have a quick and sharp tongue. I try to think before I communicate - but I don't always manage. However, to say that I help make this site feel like homey to you is just a marvelous and wonderful thing. Thank you, my friend. Alison _____________ V/r, Thank you for writing - I responded to one and will be catching up on my reading this weekend. Alison |
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