Open Poetry #42 |
ride on a fallen trophy |
poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
Ride on a fallen trophy(what I saw at the time of a storm) ------------------------------------------------ The storm enters in the roads of mankind Just then. Just then I see the horse. The pale rider. The rider is in odd With the sinewy grace it yields. A fallen beauty from trophy-room past. Storm takes a stroll down the city. Lanes and lame lives are rolling into one, Just a rider with dirt in hair A naked upper part with clotted earth. The horse closes its eye to storm. It blurs details of belly and hunger. A blur is the scene of the horse Galloping to take its rider beyond Petty days of a mundane life. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ku... you have such magic in your words... I enjoyed this very much... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Pale Rider (it recalls me Clint eastwood WESTERN ) Very nice work yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your visions are amazing, dear Ku, and you share them in this impressive poem with your usual mastery. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Absolutely beautiful. What a grand view!!! Thunder horse storm. enjoyed the reaqd, my dear friend. |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
I always enjoy reading your colourful and original writing. This is no exception... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice write...my favorite part: "A blur is the scene of the horse Galloping to take its rider beyond Petty days of a mundane life" astounding visuals...great imagery |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
"A blur is the scene of the horse Galloping to take its rider beyond Petty days of a mundane life." Your writing also has the effect of taking me out of the mundane. Beautiful imagery here. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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