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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
I couldn't take the pain anymore. So I went to the highest point of the three floor house Pills in my hand, alone in darkness Sad, confused, tired of being abused. Pills started landing in my hand unknown possibilities I said. I took the pills, thirteen in fact swallowed them, and took one last breath before I knocked myself out. I wake up to the doctors pumping my stomach, and I see my mom's frantic face. I fall asleep again and wake up to my family all surrounding me, worried and scared. I couldn't talk, or breathe correctly so I just nodded at them while my brother looked at me with worried eyes. I just wish I didn't survive now I caused grief to my whole family and I didn't realize it until now. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Angel, I've been having computer troubles, so I couldn't get back to you. There's no reason not to survive. It’s always good to survive, so you can stick it to the man, if for no other reason. Keep on writing. My whole life's been hell. It gives me loads to write about--the books sale. Bobby |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Thanks Bobby, I've been through a lot in my 14 years of existance, most of it is bad. I don't know why I get this unlucky childhood, but hey, maybe I can earn a profit from it all.... |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
There is always gain from pain as Neitche once said "What does not kill us makes us stronger" I think I got that right. If so you are becoming a very strong younge man with a powerful message in your verse. Keep writing sharyn |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Thank you sharyn :]]] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Angel, There is no such thing as "the happy childhood". Anyone that says there is has possibly just cracked under the stress. Bobby |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
You know what Angel? You may have caused your family grief but I promise you they are happy you survived… This is a very good poem Angel. I like it a lot. As far as childhoods go I have one piece of advice that I live by and share when it comes to being a parent: Remember to remember, always. Tammy<333 |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
I don't know how to react to the simple fact that I didn't try to kill myself not once but twice, but I am still alive. Why do I survive, I have no clue. I am lucky to be alive though. |
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