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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea

0 posted 2008-04-24 06:20 PM



When I go to the supermarket
I can find anything,
clothes or toys for my nephews,
I can find vivid chocolates
to forget the pain from the days,
colours or happiness or boredom
in the numerous alleys,
bottles of whisky to forget Katy
I can find whatever I need…

Babe, you are my supermarket
there are so many things about your love
that I can choose what I wish
when you are close to me.

© Copyright 2008 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
1 posted 2008-04-24 06:23 PM


What a wonderful analogy.  Love as a supermarket where you can have the best and leave the rest.  I am glad you found yours.
sharyn

Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
2 posted 2008-04-24 09:55 PM


I never thought of a love that way… How AWESOME!

Tammy<333

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2008-04-24 09:59 PM


smiles... I like your thoughts here Yann...   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
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Seoul S.Korea
4 posted 2008-04-25 01:07 AM


Beautiful... Romantic
2islander2
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by the sea
5 posted 2008-04-25 03:48 AM


Hello sharyn, your cute comment offered me smiles...

  thanks to you

    yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2008-04-25 03:49 AM


Hi Tammy I'm sure we can find anything when we are loved, it's not about prices for sure but about variety of feelings and emotions...

  hugs

   yann

2islander2
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7 posted 2008-04-25 03:51 AM


Thank you Roniece and Seoul for your lovely comments...

  Have a nice day

   yann

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