Open Poetry #42 |
mosey in lather |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady liquor with velvet eyes billboards are sexy when sipping the slow easy rain swallows from a drifter's northern and then they build highways so gypsy wheels drag their jockeys close enough to remember forgetting how the curves were before the dreams hawks are noisy in their boots flapping in another dust bowl but scaring the fences to sway so the dangle legged woman tips and falls her proper in mudslides lonely on a white dress is not dirty it is just lonely with residue always better the second time around when riding a storm with a stranger _______________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You always surprise me with your knowledge of human nature, dear D.! This poem, like all of your work, shows a unique depth of thought, besides the extraordinary use of words, that captivates me always. Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
when riding a storm with a stranger yes, I agree Mr Daark.... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
"when riding a storm with a stranger" I imagine Darkdaddy, that riding the storm out, with a stranger would make the storm so much more enjoyable to endure. Storms, can be, lovely. Even now, after all of this time, the depth of your words and sensitivity to the human spirit still touches me. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, ms r&b, ms gs...thanks ladies |
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