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Open Poetry #42

Belong to You

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-04-24 04:55 PM

Belong to You

What is it that
I see when I
look into your eyes?
An acceptance,
a sincerity,
and a desire.

My darling, all of
these things we share,
and I love looking
into you eyes
simply because
they belong
to you.

JamesLee
24April
2008

For the woman
that I love.
1 0f 7.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-04-24 05:35 PM

James,

This is good work. The poem has lovely sentiment in it.

Bobby

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

2 posted 2008-04-24 06:16 PM

"I love looking
into you eyes
simply because
they belong
to you." This is lovely and romantic. You express your sentiments well.
sharyn

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2008-04-24 06:31 PM

That's very good...Such an authentic love song...

yann

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

4 posted 2008-04-24 06:35 PM

Beautiful words for a beautiful love shared between two...

Tammy<333

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2008-04-24 10:27 PM

For the woman
that I love.
1 0f 7.

now, the blonde in me wants to ask ... you love 7 women James?!!

ooh I hope I'm one of them!

ok, back to being serious now RDB!.. a very beautiful write dear James for the woman that you love...

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2008-04-25 05:25 PM

Thank you Robert, shyvl, 2islander2, Larrysmom and Roniece for the wonderful responses...
Roniece I wrote 7 at one sitting for my honey, like a series of simple thoughts about romance and love, but I'm only posting them one at a time...I definately admire you and appreciate the personality of your writing...James

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