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Open Poetry #42

Memories of you

ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
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0 posted 2008-04-24 03:40 PM

The memories of you
Displace the water as it flows
Down into a river at rest
That symbolizes my love for you

This is as far as I can get with this...any ideas?

Caliban
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since 2008-04-23

Posts 57

1 posted 2008-04-25 10:31 PM

Hey Rain,
I'm not very good at this but maybe this will help.

Further they spill down
Thru still waters deeply running
Bright facets that reflect
The passions of your love

Hope that does something for you. I really enjoy your work. Keep writing

Alex

Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon

ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
GA

2 posted 2008-04-25 10:48 PM

Interesting. It gives me some idea of where to go with it. Thank you

And I'm very happy to hear that you like my work

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