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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
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 She came to me in a dream last night Face was smiling, hair was white No longer a farm wife, cooking and cleaning I'm sure this dream had some wonderful meaning She wore a gold necklace, embedded with stones Each one for a child she had called her own No apron tied around her clothes Youthful body, no more woes I hadn't dreamt of Grandma, since she had passed I didn't want to wake up...I wanted it to last I hugged her and told her I'd never seen her so fair I knew in my heart that this moment was rare But the rooster crowed and the sun did shine I told the family of the dream of mine My mother asked, When did you have this dream? I think I know what it may mean The anniversary of her wedding was the day before last Only Mother knew that it had quietly passed Grandma was dressed up so pretty and bright Because Grandpa Pete took her out for the night They went riding on moonbeams, and chasing the sun Drinking the raindrops, Celestial fun |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhTina~ What a lovely, lovely dream share~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
beautiful couplets. The sentiments expressed were poignant. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very beautiful and uplifting, Tina. A gift for you. Ida |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
so very beautiful. love the read. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Tina, What a special and beautiful piece of writing. Your poems speak of stories and your history. They are woven with you. I love that about them. Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Beautiful and moving. yann |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
lovely thoughts...when I dream of my Grandmother, she is making banana pudding...she must be--Heaven deserves the best...and hers was the best |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Tina. I do believe your Grandma visited you! I had a similar dream of my own grandmother after her passing. She had died from cancer, and her beautiful face had been etched in pain. However, in my dream, she was radiant and young again. I then was able to accept her passing because in my heart I knew that she was happy and at peace. Thank you so much for sharing your special dream ~ visitation? ~ with us. You wrote of it so beautifully!  Love & Eternal Light, Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Beautiful! ARCTIC WIND |
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