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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

0 posted 2008-04-23 11:14 PM

The flames of fury roar in my ear
thrusts of absolute pain smashes my figure
In this very moment I have no fear
The gun's pointed at my head, but I can't pull the trigger.

Anger is exploding in my body like atom bombs
my karma is as thorny as fresh roses
bullets of sweat is rushing down my palms
and my happiness is spreading in half like moses.

I want to hurt this thing, I want to inflict pain
but that will only bring me shame
and doing so will bring me no gain
but I am through playing these damn games.

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

1 posted 2008-04-23 11:19 PM

Wow Angel!!! This is EXCELLENT my friend! So raw and intense...

Tammy<333

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

2 posted 2008-04-23 11:25 PM

Thank you Tammy, I'm pretty infuriated at the moment, just decided to emulate it in a poem lol.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-04-23 11:26 PM

Yo Angel,

You've got the right idea here. Don't do it unless it's for gain--money, or whatever.

Bobby

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

4 posted 2008-04-23 11:28 PM

Thanks Bobby :]

Caliban
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since 2008-04-23

Posts 57

5 posted 2008-04-24 12:02 PM

A great piece on the power of anger...and how the decisions it leads you to aren't always negative. Very nice.

Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

6 posted 2008-04-24 12:05 PM

Thank you :]

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

7 posted 2008-04-24 12:13 PM

very good. Hope you felt better now.

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

8 posted 2008-04-24 12:19 PM

I feel alright, not good though :[

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2008-04-24 12:30 PM

Keep on writing. it's a better choice. Concentrate on becoming a great writer and making a difference for someone like yourself one day. You have talent, use it. Don't let anger win.
Ida

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

10 posted 2008-04-24 12:33 PM

Thank you very much Ida, I appreciate your words of wisdom. :]]]

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