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Caliban Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57 |
Memory The photograph keeps a moment of life in frozen perfection, a laugh and smile preserved. Slowly it slips from my hand and shatters on the floor, the laughter gone and smile lost. The shards on the floor sparkle with a thousand lost moments, the non-existent debris of a life gone by. I sift thru the pile and let the sands of unborn memory pour between my fingers, as I weep for what will never be. Sunny smiles never seen and joyous laughter never heard, are the unborn memories that haunt my dreams... Not really poetry i know, but it means something to me and i just wanted to put it out there. Thank you for reading. |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Not really poetry? This is an outstanding piece of poetry my friend, Welcome to Pip!!!!! |
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Caliban Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57 |
Thank you xTr3m3sT. I appreciate the kind words  Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
You're very welcome :] |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very good very good. very poetic. love the read and a warm welcome to PIP. |
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Caliban Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57 |
Thank you. Nice to be here |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WELCOME TO PIP!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alex~ WELCOME to the hallowed poetic halls of PiP~ You're going to love it here ... we are addictive !  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Caliban, a hearty Welcome to Passions! Insightful thoughts such as these spread out for individual attention give it weight and meaning. Your Poem came across as well thought out, and not just a garble of words thrown together. It is indeed, Poetry. Please check your Email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
A newcomer, myself, I welcome you to a great family of poets and friends, and this poem takes its place among so many other works of excellence that touches each of us in a special way. Art |
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Caliban Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57 |
Thank you all so much. Sunshine, special thanks to you! I love the card Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon |
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