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Open Poetry #42

Journey In The Mind

ILoveTheRain
Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
GA

0 posted 2008-04-23 10:20 PM

Journey In The Mind

Journey inside
The depths within my mind
Consuming of me, blackness
Taking its sweet time

Walking slowly along each memory
Deeper that you travel
Your own body starts trembling
The more you see; the more unraveled

You try to turn and run away
But, now my mind is haunting yours
Once you come in, you never get out
The agony becomes more and more

I will one day let you go
The day that I ascend
But until that moment comes my way
You will have nothing to help you mend

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

1 posted 2008-04-23 11:00 PM

Awesome! I love this…

Tammy<333

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2008-04-23 11:33 PM

every step resounds of experiences learned, yearned, and returned .....

inspiring

Ct

Caliban
Member

since 2008-04-23

Posts 57

3 posted 2008-04-24 12:09 PM

Beautiful. Dark, but somehow incredibly seductive.

Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-04-24 12:15 PM

"Walking slowly along each memory
Deeper that you travel
Your own body starts trembling
The more you see; the more unraveled"

Strong stanza in a very powerful write...well done...

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

5 posted 2008-04-24 10:41 AM

This is a good one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-04-24 03:46 PM

Interesting Read!

ARCTIC WIND

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