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David2
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since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

0 posted 2008-04-22 09:59 PM

A Prayer For Her

Life without love brings unending distress,
With unbearable burdens unyielding.
Grant her release from relentless duress,
And oppression pure evil is wielding.
Always to suffer an innocent’s pain,
And the price of her tyrant’s transgressions,
Free her from sorrow and tyranny’s reign,
And the storm clouds of darkest depression.
Grant her the solace and comfort she’s due,
For her years spent in silent submission.
With moments of peace too fleeting and few,
She deserves an escape from perdition.

Bless her with this as she rests in your palm,
Heartfelt relief and continuous calm.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2008-04-22 10:13 PM

This is a lovely and compassionate prayer.

LThe title typo confused me at first. Joyce

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

2 posted 2008-04-22 10:42 PM

truly heart-felt wishes. I wish the both of you peace.
sharyn

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

3 posted 2008-04-22 11:00 PM

Oh this is so full of love and hope from you to her… Beautiful.

Tammy<333

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

4 posted 2008-04-22 11:46 PM

always enjoy reading your poetry.
The effort you put in your work is always evident.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2008-04-23 02:51 PM

Beautiful and touching poem, David. You might want to use a darker print as this color can be very hard to read.
Ida

Clang
Member

since 2005-12-15

Posts 222

6 posted 2008-04-23 11:25 PM

Stunningly beautiful.

Caliban
Member

since 2008-04-23

Posts 57

7 posted 2008-04-24 12:19 PM

May your prayer be answered.

Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2008-04-24 08:10 AM

David~
I know when I see your name that I am going to be treated to a fine Sonnet ... no exception here~
You do polish your craft to the elegance of a fine poetic gem~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

9 posted 2008-04-25 12:40 PM

interesting write.

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